Excerpts from The Antiquities War
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Excerpts from The Antiquities War, by Kayla bin-Kroog: A New Translation and Commentary is a two-volume work by Taysir of Rabiah. It is a translation of the fourth and fifth volumes of The Antiquities War.[1]
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Excerpts from The Antiquities War,
by Kayla bin-Kroog.
A new translation and commentary
by Taysir of Rabiah.
Introduction
It is my purpose to provide a contemporary version of The Antiquities War, a classic in Argivian literature. Although "The Story of Urza and Mishra" is well-known throughout Terisiare, a modern interpretation was overdue. The text speaks for itself. I shall therefore confine my expository comments to footnotes.
"The Story of Urza and Mishra" takes place thousands of years after the fall of the mysterious Thran Empire. Some say that the Thran discovered a source of great power, but they were not ready to use this power properly-- and it destroyed them.
During the time of Urza and Mishra, Fallaji nomads routinely searched for Thran artifacts in the Western Desert. With caravans filled with bits and pieces of the past, the Fallaji traveled east-- to the edge of the desert, where they traded with various city-states and schools specializing in the study of Thran antiquities.
Sometimes, the nomads brought more than artifacts to the schools. Following the deaths of their parents, the two brothers came to one of the archeological schools. Here is where the tale of Urza and Mishra begins.
Volume 1: The Story of Urza and Mishra
Facet 1
- The School of Tocasia was in the land of Argive.
- Urza and Mishra lived for many years at her school,
- Where they studied the secrets of a lost race.
- One day, after the brothers had learned much from Tocasia,
- They found treasure buried beneath the surface of things.[note 2]
- After Urza and Mishra had studied for many years,
- They went with Tocasia deep into the Western Desert,
- Where they found the secrets of the Thran in the Cave of Koilos.
- Beneath the Earth, Urza and Mishra found what was lost,
- And each brother took his first step on the path of fate.[note 3]
- In the cave, Urza and Mishra found the secrets of the Thran.
- There, the brothers discovered something long forgotten--
- They found the crystal; it gave them power, but they were foolish, and now they're dead.
- Two stones of great power left behind in the darkness.
- The stones-- each with six facets of five sides, were two halves of a perfect whole.[note 4]
- Urza and Mishra left the darkness of the cave,
- As if they had stepped from the world of dreams.
- The sun sparkled on the stones and each brother coveted both.
- Tocasia was the first to see the path before them--
- A dark path of fate that had to be followed.
- ↑ The language of The Antiquities War is very compact, like the language of myth. We are told only what is important, and left to uncover the meaning for ourselves. "The Story of Urza and Mishra", the fourth of a five-part cycle, was written in the High Argivian "pictoglyph" language and takes the traditional form of sixty five-line stanzas, which are further divided into groups of five "facets." We will examine this gem symbolism in greater detail as our study progresses.
- ↑ One of the definitions of the phrase, "beneath the surface of things," in High Argivian, is "the world of the senses." In the thinking of the old Argivian scholars, the world of the senses is an "outer world" contrasting with the "inner world" of the soul. The reader should examine how this symbolic process relates to his own "inner world," where jewels may still await discovery.
- ↑ The word "koilos" is a derivation of the High Argivian word for "secret." The brothers and Tocasia traveled deep into the Western Desert-- a place no one else dared go. Only those willing to face the unknown will ever find the stone of power waiting inside their own "inner worlds."
- ↑ These Thran stones of power had lain hidden in the cave for a thousand generations. Each half of the twelve-sided gem stone, had six facets of five sides, which represented the five forces of mana. Twelve multiplied by five gives sixty-- the number of stanzas in "The Story of Urza and Mishra."
Facet 2
- Urza and Mishra left the cave on a dark path.
- Urza's stone was the Mightstone, and he hid it from Mishra.
- Mishra's stone was called the Weakstone,
- And it complemented him in being smooth and cool, even as
- Mishra was rash and hot-headed.[note 1]
- Urza's stone was the Mightstone, and Mishra's the Weakstone.
- But Urza and Mishra, each determined to possess both stones,
- Decided that a contest would best decide the fate of the stones.
- After the struggle, Tocasia left Argive for the Land of the Dead.
- And the brothers buried Tocasia beneath her school.[note 2]
- After the struggle, Urza left Mishra and the School of Tocasia.
- Urza went far away, to the City of Kroog, where the king
- Held a contest of strength to find a husband for the princess.
- With the power of the Mightstone, Urza built his Avenger
- And Urza found the first secrets on his path of fate.[note 3]
- Urza went with his Avenger to the contest of strength.
- After the others had failed, the King gave Urza his chance.
- Urza missed his brother, and wished that Mishra could see
- How Urza's Avenger would more powerful than ten men.
- Urza and Mishra were two halves of a perfect whole.
- Mishra missed his brother, and wished that Urza
- Was with him on his lonely path of fate.
- Deep in the Western Desert, Mishra was enslaved by the Fallaji.
- Under a cold moon, Mishra dreamed of another world.
- Mishra left the world of dreams, and was followed.[note 4]
- ↑ The Weakstone's characteristic is to draw the power from objects. Urza's stone, the Mightstone, possesses the opposite characteristic. The individual stones are halves of a complete whole, each incomplete without the other. As with the stones, so were the brothers. Urza and Mishra were separated by their obsessions and greed. They thought only of their own desires, not the balance of the whole.
- ↑ We can only speculate about the contest between the two brothers. The narrative is mute regarding the details, except that the victor would possess both stones. As a result of the contest, Tocasia was killed and her school was most likely destroyed. The Mightstone remained with Urza, and the Weakstone with Mishra. Following the death of Tocasia, the brothers chose separate paths... paths that took them in very different directions. But when those paths crossed, the consequences were devastating.
- ↑ This is the first reference to the artifact called Urza's Avenger. Little is known about it. It was probably Urza's first attempt at creating an artificial warrior. Urza continued this line of research with the Yotian soldiers, of which we will learn more. In the next stanza, we meet Kayla bin-Kroog, the author of "The Story of Urza and Mishra." Throughout the text, Kayla breaks with the canons of Argivian poetry and never refers to herself in the first person. She also does not present herself in a wholly flattering light. This trait of honesty gives the reader an objective image of Kayla's experience with Urza.
- ↑ This is one of the more puzzling stanzas in the test, as it contains two mysteries. Fallaji records consist of knotted cords which defy analysis. They formed tribes based on a rigid system of kinship. These individual tribes were arranged in a hierarchy of dominance, with each tribe owing fealty to its immediate superior. Over time, Mishra was able to confederate various tribes under his central control. The second mystery concerns Mishra's dream: significant, because it could be our first indication that Mishra was able to travel between planes. How Mishra accomplished this is unknown, but a planeswalking spark could have been fanned to life by his encounter with the Weakstone.
Facet 3
- Mishra was deep in the Western Desert, on a lonely path.
- Apart from his brother, Mishra found his way among the Fallaji.
- ...While Urza became Artificer of Kroog, with many apprentices...
- But Urza was alone-- a stranger to even his wife.
- Urza's stone was the Mightstone, and it complemented him.[note 1]
- The conference at Korliss, attended by Urza and Mishra,
- Quickly turned to bickering, and no agreement was reached.
- Mishra and the King of Kroog fought with each other,
- And a treacherous king became the enemy of all.
- The powerful failed the contest of strength.[note 4]
- At Korliss, Mishra fought with Urza and the King of Kroog.
- The brothers pitted the forces of the stones against each other.
- Urza's stone, the Mightstone, served him well--
- While Mishra's stone, the Weakstone, betrayed him.
- Enslaved, Urza and Mishra followed the path of Fate.[note 5]
- ↑ This text reveals that Kayla felt ignored by Urza, possibly even jealous of his work, feelings that drove Kayla in a dangerous direction. We also see how the paths of Mishra and Urza diverged. Mishra forged a trading federation among the various Fallaji tribes. Urza, under the patronage of the King of Kroog, developed something akin to a guild structure, wherein apprentices labored for Urza in exchange for an education.
- ↑ The text gives us little information about Ashnod, except that she is icy and cold, in sharp contrast to the heat of the Western Desert. If Mishra is a hot, feeling character, he is balanced by the cold Ashnod. But when such opposite forces come together, there can often be great misery.
- ↑ Korliss had always been a neutral territory, so the trading conference was held there. Its purpose was to address trading issues raised by Mishra's confederation of the Fallaji tribes into a unified trading bloc. The Argivian city states needed the ancient Thran technology and power crystals found only in the Western Desert. The merchants and nobles chafed under the Fallaji terms, and urged desperate action.
- ↑ Kayla blames her father for the "attack at Korliss." It provoked the brothers' struggle into open conflict. The incident forced all the parties to choose sides. The Argivian city-states, linked by generations of arranged marriages and economic ties, suddenly found themselves face to face with the newly confederated tribes of the Fallaji.
- ↑ The word "betrayed" in High Argivian implies purpose and guile, almost as if the Weakstone possessed a kind of volition-- possibly even intelligence. We will see this intelligence of the stones of power, of the inner life, become more pronounced as "The Story of Urza and Mishra" continues.
Facet 4
This facet marks a turning point in the struggle between Urza and Mishra. Both have established themselves as leaders, and their personal conflict includes whole nations. Some historians credit this to their charisma and personal power. I believe that we must resist the temptation to believe that history is only carried on the shoulders of great men. While Urza may have been a resourceful and brilliant artificer, the picture we have of him is anything but charismatic. I think it safe to say that the King and merchants of Kroog would not have thrown their support behind Urza if his conflict with Mishra did not promise great wealth and the opportunity to expand the domain of Kroog trade.
However, history shows that the King and merchants of Kroog may have underestimated their ability to steer the conflict between the brothers in a profitable direction. The conference at Korliss proved that. But by this point, the war had begun and it was too late to turn back.
- Urza served the King of Kroog.
- And pursued Mishra and the Fallaji into an ocean of sand.
- Urza found that the Fallaji were cunning opponents
- Who used the desert as a weapon.
- Urza, deep in the Western Desert, was alone on his path.[note 1]
- The Western Desert was an ocean of sand,
- And only the Fallaji traveled its depths.
- But the deep desert had secrets hidden even from the Fallaji.
- The Thran guarded their mysteries in the Cave of Koilos,
- But Mishra and Ashnod were determined to find them.
- Mishra and Ashnod travelled to the Cave of Koilos,
- The birthplace of the Mightstone and Weakstone.
- In this place of power and destiny buried beneath the sands,
- The Weakstone opened a gateway that led to another world.
- And Mishra crossed paths with the secrets of power.
- Mishra and Ashnod traveled to another world
- Where they tamed strange, mechanical beasts.
- This world was dark, like no other-- with a sky as black as pitch.
- Mishra and Ashnod returned to Argive, but not before they
- Fought a powerful enemy.[note 2]
- Mishra and Ashnod returned to Argive,
- And then the beasts from another world followed them--
- The Dragon Engines with jaws of steel and eyes of fire.
- And a black heart, like a shadow of doom,
- Followed Mishra and served well the path of fate.[note 3]
Thus ends the first section of The Antiquities War.
- ↑ Kayla shows a keen understanding of the Fallaji strategy. By luring the Kroog forces deeper into the Western Desert, the Fallaji accomplished two things-- 1) the desert would take its toll on the Kroog forces, and 2) by pursuing the Fallaji nomads, the city of Kroog would be left without adequate defenses. Even though Kroog had the ornithopters, they had only a short range and needed constant repair. This course of action provided the Fallaji with a significant advantage in the battle of Kroog.
- ↑ Other ancient narratives (such as "The Journey of Morath" or "Jarsyl's Journals") could be interpreted as travel between planes, but none are as clear and direct as this stanza in "The Story of Urza and Mishra." It describes Mishra's journey to the plane of Phyrexia, a hideous hell of mechanical beasts and demons. Any planeswalker determined to travel to Phyrexia is urged to exercise the utmost caution. Like the maps of old, this place should be marked "here abide monsters."
- ↑ The war between Urza and Mishra spread across Yotia and the Great Desert-- even to the plane of Phyrexia. As we shall see, Mishra's experience in Phyrexia seems to change him. The "black heart" referred to in the last stanza spreads over Mishra like a "shadow of doom." Although some scholars believe that the black heart is a symbol of the dark fate that Mishra brought on himself by his greed and his lust for power, I believe that the "black heart" actually refers to a Phyrexian demon that followed Mishra and Ashnod through a planar gate and into the Cave of Koilos. Whatever the interpretation, it is plain that Mishra's character changes drastically at this point, becoming darker and more dangerous. In the next facet, we will see Mishra's dark heart spread over the land and engulf the city of Kroog in shadow and flame.
Volume 2: The Urza-Mishra War
Facet 1
- A heart of fire and steel returned to Argive, hardened in the forge of the Western Desert. Between battles with Mishra, Urza came home to Kroog-- but even there, Urza's soul knew no peace. Urza was alone.[note 1]
- In the Western Desert, the secrets of the past were born from the very womb that gave birth to the Mightstone and the Weakstone. The Goddess of Knowledge granted many gifts, but the mysteries of the Thran were hidden in the Cave of Koilos.[note 2]
- The Mightstone and Weakstone, born in the Cave of Koilos, were washed in sand and blood in the war between the brothers. Mishra, who was very cunning, laid a trap for his brother. Mishra's Dragon Engines fell upon Urza and his men, and Mishra crossed the sands to another destiny.
- Mishra and his Dragon Engines crossed the sands to destroy Urza and the King of Kroog. Mishra did not hear the first cries of Urza's son-- mere whispers drowned out by the screams of the dying. Mishra returned to Argive with mechanical beasts.[note 3] The screams of the King of Kroog rose to heaven-- while his seven souls went to their seven hells. Thus did Mishra and his Dragon Engines destroyed the city of Kroog.[note 4]
- Urza returned to find his newborn son mutilated, and then followed the black path of fate. After Mishra destroyed the city of Kroog, years passed, and Urza built a tower and hid it from the eyes of men. In his tower, Urza worked for many moons without rest to build a weapon that would kill his brother. The battles between Urza and Mishra hardened Urza's soul.[note 5]
- Mishra worked for years to build a stronghold far from his brother and the city-states of Terisiare.[note 6] Here, the cold-eyed Ashnod combined artifacts with human flesh until she tore an abomination-- the transmogrant-- from the very womb of the Goddess of Knowledge.[note 7]
- Far from the city-states of Terisiare-- Korliss and Sarinth-- and the war between Urza and Mishra, the Brotherhood of Gix prayed for the souls of artifacts[note 8] and offered gifts to their Lord of the Machine, who was very cunning and laid a trap for Urza and Mishra.
- Urza offered gifts to the Lord of Korliss. Powerful mechanical men to protect the people of Korliss, who were frequently attacked by the Fallaji. Urza's Yotian Soldiers were built to tell friend from foe, and destroy the Dragon Engines of Mishra.
- The Dragon Engines of Mishra attacked Korliss. Urza fashioned the Yotian Soldiers, and they were powerful, but the Yotian Soldiers could not see Ashnod's Transmogrants. At last, the Martyrs of Korliss sacrificed their lives, and then their souls rose to heaven.[note 9]
- ↑ This stanza refers to a point about one year after the conference at Korliss. After a number of early and very bloody battles, the territories of the two brothers had stabilized. Urza and his allies controlled the greater part of the Argivian region while the confederated Fallaji tribes controlled the bordering areas of the western desert. During this time, Mishra's forces raided Argivian outposts, while Urza launched ornithopter sorties from Kroog. This dominance in the air was a continuous threat to the Fallaji.
- ↑ These secrets of the past continue to elude scholars. However, we are told earlier that Mishra and Ashnod crossed over into the world of Phyrexia through a gate that the Weakstone opened for them in the cave of Koilos. When they returned, Dragon Engines followed them. If that gateway remained open, could not a denizen of Phyrexia have followed as well? The Phyrexian Demon could well be the 'dark heart' that plagued Mishra.
- ↑ The fearsome Dragon Engines were not strictly 'mechanical,' as the term is used here. In the Engines' native plane Phyrexia, the distinction between organic and artificial life is indistinct. However, some uncovered remains suggest that Mishra might have built copies of the creatures using materials at hand. The scholar Jarsyl's Codex Phyrexia classified these Engines, as well as other he encountered during many trips to Phyrexia. Although Jarsyl never returned from his final trip to Phyrexia, his Codex remains the key to our understanding of this inhospitable region.
- ↑ Recent excavation in Yotia has uncovered the ruins of Kroog-- buried under layers of soil and sediment, brought down from the north by glaciation during the great Ice Age. Evidence of intense heat was evident on the ruins-- the legacy of the Dragon Engines. Kroog was the first city, but certainly not the last, to be destroyed by the Brothers' War.
- ↑ There is no information abut the actual location of Urza's many towers and industrial plants, although most believe they were located northeast of Kroog. Local legend holds that Urza's tower didn't exist in Terisiare at all, but at some nexus between planes. According to myth, the tower reappears in Yotia during certain conditions-- with Urza still in residence after hundreds of generations. Seekers of the tower believe that treasure beyond compare still hides behind the tower walls.
- ↑ Although Urza's tower continues to elude archaeologists, Mishra's stronghold was found in the Kher Ridges-- built on the foundation of the School of Tocasia. Recent excavations revealed the remains of projectile weaponry, safeguarding Mishra's stronghold from Ornithopter attacks while it's strategic position shielded it from ground assaults. Many human bones, undoubtedly those of slaves and prisoners, were discovered, marred by brutal surgical techniques-- grim testament to Ashnod's atrocities.
- ↑ Ashnod's Transmogrants, a fusion of man and machine, were terrifying weapons. A living specimen, too grotesque and unpredictable to display, still exists beneath the museum at the College of Lat-Nam. This incredibly old wretch dating from the Brother's War is certainly no longer human.
- ↑ The Brotherhood of Gix no longer exists on Terisiare. Its abbey was destroyed and its members scattered following the Battle of Teonacall. However, there are whispered reports that the Brotherhood still maintains an abbey somewhere on another plane. It is also said that the Priests of Yawgmoth, more machine than man, can trace their genealogy to the monks of this order.
- ↑ There is disagreement among the scholars as to the actual identities and actions of the Martyrs of Korliss during the fall of the Transmogrants and the rescue of the city. We can safely assume that the Yotian Soldiers were successful because Korliss still exists. Although the names of the Martyrs have long been lost, their bravery is still celebrated in the Argivian tradition of Badzahar.
Facet 2
- Heaven sacrificed a portion of its glory to bring the Ivory Tower into the world. The Ivory Tower gleamed in the sun, white as bleached bone. Here, the Archimandrite was determined to find a way to halt the battles of Urza and Mishra.[note 1]
- The Archimandrite of the Ivory Tower convened a council, but the delegates could find no solution to the problem of the war between the brothers, so emissaries from the council were sent to the stronghold of Mishra.[note 2]
- Emissaries of the Ivory Tower were sent to Mishra. They asked Mishra to meet with Urza in the Ivory Tower, where all drank from the well of peace. Mishra killed the envoys and no one prayed for their souls.
- Emissaries were sent to the tower of Urza. Although Urza was kinder to his guests than his brother, he would not return with them to the council. Urza refused to turn from his path of fate and his vow to destroy Mishra.
- Two moons passed before the Ivory Tower council convened again. Since the brothers would not listen to the offer of the council, the council decided that there was no choice but to take the lives of Urza and Mishra. The council of the Ivory Tower decided to travel to the Cave of Koilos to find a way to stop the brothers.
- After seven years, the Brotherhood of Gix opened a doorway to another world without the knowledge of the Archimandrite of the Ivory Tower. Without the knowledge of the Ivory Tower, Harbin, the son of Urza, grew to manhood. Harbin went through the initiation of darkness and fire and became a warrior priest for Argive during the war between Urza and Mishra.[note 3]
- The council of the Ivory Tower fought with Mishra in the Great Desert. Mishra struggled with his own black heart under the hot sun. When Urza and his ornithopters joined the battle, many were killed and no one drank from the well.
- Urza and Mishra fought with the black heart in the desert. The power of the Mightstone combined with the Weakstone-- each stone a destination on the road of fate-- banished the black heart back to the world from which it came. The path of fate was kinder to Urza than to Mishra.[note 4]
Thus was born an alliance which would alter the course of the Urza-Mishra war-- one deserved of a volume all its own. -- Taysir of Rabiah
- ↑ The meeting of the council at the Ivory Tower in the western rift of Terisiare marks the interrelated forces of Mana. Ironically, if it were not for the conflict between Urza and Mishra, this first step might never have been taken.
- ↑ Sources state that the council of the Ivory Tower was attended by delegates representing various political, religious, and tribal affiliations present in Terisiare. Each of these groups had their own unique way of explaining the world around them. The Brotherhood of Gix, for example, believed in an afterlife for mechanical artifacts, while the tribes of the Yumok nations considered all contact with artifacts anathema. The various world views represented by the delegates evolved into our present understanding of Mana and the nature of the multiverse.
- ↑ The text refers to the complicated initiation rite of the Argivian warrior-priests, codified in the Nakara scrolls. After successful completion of the initiation ordeal, the young men were given swords, which represented their newly-forged souls, and were then trained in the use of the blades-- a training of both body and spirit. If we look at the symbolic meaning of this stanza, we learn that the individual must pass through darkness and fire in order to temper the soul. Only a soul so prepared is ready to wield the stone of power from the inner world.
- ↑ Although the text does not give many details about the battle in the desert with the black heart, it is believed that the brothers struggled with a Phyrexian demon that might have entered Terisiare through the gateway in the cave of Koilos. The text of this stanza specifically states that the combined power of the mightstone and weakstone from which it came; so, Urza and Mishra must have worked together to accomplish a common goal. The actual nature of that goal may never be known. However, the last line of the stanza foreshadows what is to come.
- ↑ Here, Kayla Bin-Kroog makes a cutting comment about Tawnos given Kayla's relationship with him. One might expect Kayla to make allowances for Tawnos's jealousy. Such uncompromising honesty, as well as the deplorable state of current Argivian literature, makes one wish that Kayla Bin-Kroog were still alive and writing today. We could certainly use her gifts.
In-game references
- Referred to:
- Battlefield Forge (The Brothers' War)
- Brushland (The Brothers' War)
- Inspiring Statuary (Retro Artifacts, #85)
- Ivory Tower (Retro Artifacts, #86)
- Llanowar Wastes (The Brothers' War)
- Mishra, Tamer of Mak Fawa (The Brothers' War, #295)
- Nature's Spiral (Dominaria)
- Underground River (The Brothers' War)
- Urza, Prince of Kroog (The Brothers' War, #296)
References
- ↑ Source: Antiquities War and Urza–Mishra War comics.