User talk:The Squirle master

You're doing good so far, just made a few minor corrections (torn asunder, not thorn asunder, etc). One thing I'm not sure how to fix tho, as I don't know this plotline -- near the end of your Kentsu article, you mention one of the soldiers given the choice to run or fight, and that he was one of the few who 'chose correctly.' This is both a biased statement, and does not directly say what the correct decision was, which can lead to confusion. Please fix. VestDan 11:25, 10 January 2006 (CST)